Feedback from Rough Cut

Here is the feedback which I gathered after showing the first draft of my teaser trailer to my classmates.

· Add institutions at the beginning
· Look at the conventions of the coming soon title to make it more realistic
· Maybe include voice over on the titles
· Add music, maybe different pieces for the shots of the man and woman
· Add in a new scream as it doesn't sound realistic
· Add CCTV recording symbol, so is clear to the audience what it is showing
· When man screams add music of a violin maybe, so makes it more intense for the audience
· Add music when the woman talks to show her fear
· Maybe have more heartbeats or thumps on the transitions

The things that they liked about my rough cut were:

· The heartbeat for the transition
· The black and white camera shot for the CCTV
· The titles
· Mise-en-scene of the villains gives a clear representation because of their outfits
· The tilted camera shot of the wheels driving off, because it puts the audience in the scene
· Good forms and conventions
· My idea of having the music looped/repeated, because it will show that the man is trapped